One Piece: Treasure Cruise is an Alternate Universe (AU) site where the straw hats and all the other famous pirates of the animanga do not exist.
The Time frame for the site is around the same time frame of the Animanga so the technology and such are on par with what is seen in the show though some advances can be made within reason of course.
There should be no mention of cannon characters as none of them exist and although there may be certain things that are similar to the animanga as this site is based off of it, the animanga is not considered cannon on this site.
Plot
Seventy years ago the three way war going on within the sky was still happening with high casualties on all sides. Because of this a truce was initiated. Each island would have its own independence away from rule of the other islands. The truce would hold so long as they stayed on their respective island and did not venture off into the territory of the other islands. Although there have been news about multiple Birkans, Shandians, or Skypieans dying while on one of the other islands the open, all-out fighting has stopped and a lot of the killing has been toned down. However, this has not stopped many sky islanders from leaving their home in search of a peaceful life down in the Blue Oceans not knowing that they were going from one multiple century long war to another.
Around sixty years ago the revolutionaries had a secret base within East Blue on Colors Island. The secret base there was becoming so successful due to the fact that none would suspect any trouble out of the weakest ocean in the world, so much so that they would be surprised to run into high ranking officials of the revolution there. This went on for about ten years until the World Government finally got wind of the location of the hideout. The fight was brought to the base and the leader of the revolution at the time stayed behind to fight off the attack giving his people time to escape. Due to the public execution of the leader of the revolution having hurt the recruiting process for a few years it was then that the revolution decided to work through a system of council so that there would never again be just one leader of the revolution but five one for each blue and one for the Grand Line as a whole. Forty years ago people began to move back to colors island and multiple towns and villages have sprang up there each named after a specific color.
In the present time the fighting has become less open warfare and more vying for islands and power. However fighting between the revolution and the World Government still persist because of this the World Government has increased taxes. This has caused unrest in many of the civilians and has bolstered the ranks of the revolution. However in a move that no one saw coming there have been several individuals who feel as if the revolution is just as bad as the World Government and have gone to sea on their own to live by their own code and to enjoy their freedom. These pirates have sparked the Golden Pirate Era which has also sparked an increase in bounty hunters which is a fine way to earn a living and pay those raised taxes without joining the marines revolutionaries or the pirates.
Combat Based RPG
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Tremendous Physical Power & Stamina - Over the years Zero has worked his body into tremendous shape doing various forms of manual labor over the years. He has tremendous raw power and speed.His stamina is also tremendous as evident that he jogs a 100 miles a day, often doing so while reading one of his books. It has also been said that Zero's hands are as tough as steel. This skill set becomes frightening when combined with his martial art style Jeet Kune Do.
-takes out Ban Hammer-
Just kidding... lol Okay, there's a tiny problem with this...
First off, This SA is actually a three for one combination and that we can't allow as it wouldn't be fair to others who only have two. You've mentioned, Stamina, speed and physical power which translate to strength in my opinion. So, All I ask if for you to choose which one would you want as rookies can only have two SAs. Stamina would mean he could use his powers longer and last longer in battles, speed would, of course, mean he'd be faster than rookies without a Speed SA or ability and physical power would be basically the same as speed but for strength. Additionally, his hands being tough as steel would go well with a durability or strength SA, though i'll allow you to keep it for the others as well, since he's a martial arts practitioner
Okay, first things first twitch, I'd like for you to change the 50ft radius to 15 ft. 50ft is well beyond what a rookie is capable of, regardless of the devil fruit. Also, with the weakness for rookie rank... did you mean he could only split objects\people apart and not add them to other things or? did you mean that he can't add body parts to inanimate objects?
Side Note: Being that the fruit you are going for is popular and powerful, members of the site have the chance to challenge you for the fruit's ability. In One piece a devil fruit reappears when the current user dies, this means that if you are challenged for the fruit and lose you will die and the fruit will be passed on. The challenge can't be denied or ignored and would result in an automatic loss, this applies to all the members on the site and is not limited to just popular or strong devil fruits. It applies to almost anything a character has. Yours will be more prone to being challenged because of it's popularity. That being said, free to challenge people if you want what they have.
Filling In for our dear Head Admin The Problem (who has a new job) ~ ~ Taking from Red's review and after reading the new SA's... By the power invested in me by Kami himself, I Mr. Popo..now declare you man and fishwife... >_>
Oh I actually meant Thick not thin and intermediate wouldn't just break out lol... It'll just be harder to freeze them, though once frozen it'll be hard for anyone who isn't let's say above intermediate to move let alone get out.
As a Fishwoman, Karine already possesses incredible physical strength on land compared to ordinary Humans. However, when submerged in the water her physical strength, speed and durability are all magnified, allowing her to let loose with every last drop of power that she has.
Give a brief description on how strong she actually is and how much stronger she gets under water, an example could be that because she is a fishwoman, her strength is greater than rookies with and without a strength SA, however it wouldn't be to much above a rookie with the SA or you could add that her fishwoman strength makes her free form physical attacks deal rookie level tech damage. Basically, her normal punch would be like a rookie level tech. Lastly, her underwater strength could double the damage dealt by her rookie techs, making them basically intermediate level attacks, in terms of damage.
The distance that Zero can freeze at his current level is roughly 50 ft. People of veteran level or above and those who possess tremendous strength would be able to break free from the ice before being frozen.
Rookie level range would be 10ft, however seeing how this is a logia devil fruit ability. I'll allow you to push the cap to 15ft max range.
They can remain alive in a form of suspended animation for some time in their icy prison, but any decent hit will shatter them to pieces
The way your description reads is that this rookie level technique can freeze the opponent "inside and out" basically turning them into a frozen statue. Freezing them and then shattering them would kill them right? Rookie level techniques are rarely able to kill, despite the fact that this is a DF tech, I don't see a rookie being able to completely freeze a person's body. A think layer of ice along the skin and what not to stop movement, with addtional effects such as severe freezer burn and the like is fine.Lastly, Please add in that because these are rookie techniques they would have a hard time stopping those who are at the intermediate level or higher
My bad neah,I tend to sleep a lot. Alright there a few minor things I see that needs a quick edit.
SAs: Firstly, rookies sure allowed two special abilities to start with it can range from Incredible Will to almost anything, like Skilled Navigator. Being that you are a rubber man, I'd say give him a Endurance SA, as Luffy was hardly effected by blunt force trauma, if effected at all.
Hyperlinks:
Second, Hyperlinks your Devil Fruit and techs. We only require that you hyper link the names to the actual approved app. You do not have to include the description of the techs in your app.
These techs are well done, all I ask is that you add a little more information on what would happen if certain techs come into contact with a certain level defensive tech or SA. Example, "blank" tech would break through most Rookie level defenses with one use and damage and/or break defenses of the same rank(after repeated use)
Keep in mind that some characters might have an SA for enhanced endurance,which allows them to withstand certain techs, so I'd like to see what would happen when faced with a opponent with this sort of SA.
If you have any questions feel free to ask me, because I'm not sure if this sounds understandable. Working on less than 3 hours of sleep ^.^
